woodland wolf

wow! that was cool except for the last line but thats proberly just me you can proberly guess by my pic and name what my fav animal is lol. and ...

that was kind of odd. =] thought you were trying to hard on that piece, you should let it come to you naturaly if that makes sense (hope it does) ...

hi i loved the ending! bit annoying that it ended just like that but thats good. =] bit confused at why shes trying to kill herself if you have time ...

hi i liked that!!!! told you i would reply!! *grins wolfishly* thought it had a disapointing ending, was hoping for a bit of romance but.....none. =[ thats ok it seemed ...

i liked it very sad and angry feelings coming trough to me. whats better is that you apparently based it on a real true ocasion which i feel is how ...

thats cool i agree some parts did get boring like when eragon is doing his training out of eragon and eldest i have to say that eragon kept me hooked ...